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Another Cut on My Arm

Another cut on my arm
Resembles the friend i lost

I once thought he could have been the one
But no

He found someone else
He loves her

It doesn't hurt me that he moved on
It hurts to know that he is no longer my friend

I still love him,
only as a brother of course

But here goes another cut on the arm
Here goes another piece gone

He said he would wait for me
He once stood on the shore awaiting my return

But when i returned with joy in my heart
He wasn't there to share it with

Another piece of my heart gone
Another cut on my arm
Another friend close to me....gone

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  • Swan song gold member
    September 6, 2008
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    I agree heal dear no guy is worth it lol


  • Wolf Mancini
    June 25, 2008

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    Heal....

    I hope this isn't true either.
    Very powerful and sad.
    You have much love to give...it is in your words.
    Please don't cheat someone else of this great gift you have to offer.

    peace
    xo
    wolf


  • SexyAngel0418
    June 10, 2008
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    wow cassie!!! you did a great job on this one as well!!! Very well written!!!!

    Hugs,
    Beth


  • XXCrimsonRaineXX
    June 7, 2008

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    I really liked this, probably because I can relate. I'm only friends with the guy I'm in love with because he's dating my other best friend. It really hurts sometimes, seeing them together. Anyway, awesome write.
    XXCrimsonRaineXX


  • The Grimm Poet
    June 6, 2008
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    Please tell me this is not true

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