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Please solve me~

Your words reside in my heart
'You said that I am puzzle'
but you forgot you are
the one who have the missing piece
And there is always more to tell
But the truth in love is found,
becoming my only guiding light
heart of my heart..
Wrapped tightly around,
lifting me from agony
within my soul
Words are just arising from everything
'Please solve me'
There is a need to veil the secret
the secret..is no secret anymore
I have dedicated my soul
to spill the ink
and dissolve all the fears
in a world where I only seem to weep..

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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  • PrabhuDayal Khattar silver member
    June 8, 2008

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    Thisa is indeed a creative and beautifully devised piece bringing the depth and the wonders in every word...thanks for sharing it...


  • penman gold member
    June 7, 2008
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    Beautiful

    So loving and passionate. A truly stunning creation. Best of luck in the contest.

    • Amarige
      June 7, 2008
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      Thank you my sweet friend.your comments are always much appreciated
      Ruby