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Rain drops

CryThe rain falls outside

were warm and safe

undercovers talking

lying in your bed

you tell me we belong together

and you would never leave

you promise to love me

but your saying things you dont mean

breaking my heart again

sweet drops of pain

here I am again

Standing,waiting,bleeding

Im drowning in my tears

this is how it will end....Cry

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  • fairytalelovestory
    August 27, 2008
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    oh how sad, yet so beautiful, and i can so relate. this is just making me love you.


  • SouthernDownpour
    July 2, 2008

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    awe, this is sad. but yet again i know these lines so well.

    "you promise to love me

    but your saying things you dont mean

    breaking my heart again "

    fantastic!


  • forgedreality
    June 17, 2008

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    o man this was like my ex as well
    u get the last part well

    But i like the 1st part the best
    Great Job


  • twistedfairytale
    June 15, 2008

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    this poem reminds me of my ex saying all the things that makes your heart melt but in the end it just all lies'

  • celadia
    June 9, 2008
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    Sad, I know what you mean sometimes I wonder why go on, it's so hard when people are against you.


  • DarkLotus4Life.
    June 8, 2008
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    So sad but I really like it its an amazing poem

  • Bob Fox
    June 8, 2008

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    That idea

    Love, often a word so abused, and it leads to even more abuse. At times self inflicted. Love? Do we really understand what it is about?


  • Feirce.Dino
    June 7, 2008

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    Thats Wicked Sad =( I Know How You Feel Trust I Do It Sux Really Badley But I Hope You Get Thru It XD As Im Going Thru The Same Problem Right Now

  • OurxBeginning
    June 6, 2008
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    This is sad, but it might not end up like that. Try to think positive, love is wonderful and works in mysterious ways, nice job.


  • nuttynettles
    June 6, 2008
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    wow so much pain

    so strong and painful
    i so feel your pain

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