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Not Yet Awake

Not asleep
Not yet awake
Drifting in a
World of thought and
No more.

Pervasive reality
Invading my world of
Dreams

You are not
With me now so
Let me return
To the land of
dreams where
Forever
You're by my side

Author notes

I have always written little poems for my girlfriends just to leave as an offline message or an email or something like that. I was actually impressed with this little poem that I wrote and with the girl I wrote it for's permission, I'm posting it. It was written June 5th 2008.

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  • Darc Fragile Rose
    July 18
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    great

    this is really good... *gets lost in though*
    Rose

  • Midnight-x-Rose gold member
    June 11

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    Can really relate to this, as am wanting someone right now who claims to never have loved me and for me to stay away from him, though he claimed he loved me... so at least in my dreams, he's with me and he'll love me forever.

    • PoeticusVeritas gold member
      June 11
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      Yes but we cant just remain in our dreams.otherwise we never move forward with our life. but there are times when those memories are so strong thatit seems a crime to awaken from the dream.

  • Pretty Britty gold member
    June 6
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    Ooo look!
    A shiny button...

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