Dont be afraid of the cutt on her arms
and dont look at it as selfharm.
The scars are just reminders of her dreadful past
she thinks about how long the pain will last.
The scars show her how not to belive in love
oh how she wishes to be an angle from above.
Her emotions she hides under her sleeves in shame
thinking how she will end this game?
She cutts not to die but to feel relief
i know this may leave you in disbelive.
That a girl like that can cause so much pain
and just look away as her life is drained.
She ask for peolpe not to hurt her anymore
She tells herself she's done just walk out the door.
you think its bad as she rolls up her sleeves
exposing secrets to hard to belive!
you think she's perfect and everythings fine
but whats in her mindis a bomb waiting for the perfect time.
whats in her hand,nothing but a knife
you see the tears in her eyes and afraid she may end her life.
She has scars from longago but as you can see staying alive is her regret!!!!!!
Author notes
this is a poem about myself pretty much.
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I like this
sad poem
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you make me want to hug you.
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I'm sorry your in so much torment. if you ever just need someone to bring your spirits up, just message.
take it easy,
~pithyAplomB ps... hope things get better. -
i like this one better then the other one. <3
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excellent poem. i love it!
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great poem!
brilliant!! -
this is amazing. O:
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this is awesome
i kinda feel the same thing about myself
but ive had my try at suicide and and it made for me was more problems than ppl expect
anyway, keep up the good work
=]
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I am going to assume that you two know each other,
( Jessi & Broken) but I am going to say what I have to. This is a very emotional poem, and if it indeed is about you, then so be it. I believe that everyone has these issues to deal with and, to be honest, you cannot tell someone to NOT be suicidal, it is not going to happen. Nothing anyone says or does will change how you think, Broken, but, though I do not know you, I do know how it feels to be left behind. I have had 2 friends leave me (VIA SUICIDE) and that feeling lies heavy on your heart. I can only hope that you do not plan on leaving your friends behind, that these are only thoughts.
The poem, though was very well written, and I enjoyed it.
(sorry about the life lesson, but I think everyone at some point has been sucidal---yes this includes me--- and it takes some heavy conversation to point them in another direction.) I hope that your liffe does indeed, take a turn for the best (though it rarely does) and I can only wish you good luck, so...Good luck in life. There are always alternatives, though, and you should keep that in mind. -
Heres your list of reasons not too.
Brandy.
-Allison
-Katie
-Daroin
-joe
-Amanda Ray
-Leanna
-Shelby -
im sure she really cares about the typos.. i think there is a much bigger issue...
im in the exact same shoes as you... I will tell you not to do it and maybe learn from my advise :S
i have no idea your situation but im still going to tell you... you'll be missing out on so much... like what? i dont know... but everything happens for a reason. im not good with advice or watever u wanna call it... but yea. Keep Your Head Up -
very emotional, very well done. this poem flows very nicely. there are quite a few mispellings and typos. Great job.
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