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Love Me Tender

Love me tender through and through
The authenticity of your love I always knew
And now what else is there to do?
Now that I know your love is true.

Take hold of my heart, sweet angel, don’t let go
Always let the pure emotion show.
Never ending – our love is so,
From here to the end our love shall only grow.

Don’t stop to make my heart skip a beat,
One who loves you more than I, you shall never meet.
My love remains strange but always complete.
From this war of love I swear never to retreat!

I know I’m no good, no amazing beauty or wisdom do I retain
I’m sorry if, heh, too much do I complain.
When you wish to hurt me, I ask you; please refrain,
For great quantities of your love I’ll always try to obtain.

Love me tender
Love me right
Enjoy in this sweet love’s splendor
Let your heart take such flight!

Don’t be afraid, I know you find trusting hard,
And make sure my love is something you never discard.
I know that around your heart you have a steel guard,
But I’ll never treat you baby with any disregard.

I’ve not always been faithful, right or fair
But I know one thing; our love is there.
The love I feel for you well there’s no compare
For all of my care.

Bum da da bumm . . .

Love me tender
Baby, love me right
To my love you must surrendor
Just hold me tight!

Love me tender, Baby---
Love me tender, maybe---
Maybe tonight, maybe tonight
We’ll be alright.

Baby just love me tender tonight.

Author notes

A song, I wrote.
If you want me to,
I can sing it to you ♥

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  • echo-ink
    June 11, 2008

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    Tender and sweet

    I liked the poem very much, theres nothing like an honest love poem, where you tell the secrets of your heart!!!


  • RawrSmileBabyPlz
    June 9, 2008
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    Good i like it


  • Merciful-Manner
    June 8, 2008

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    creative

    I like it, And for me a musician to say that takes alot. You really are a good writer. Keep on writing`, You fantastic writer.

  • OurxBeginning Greeters member
    June 7, 2008

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    A very sweet set of lyrics. I can relate a lot. Love is wonderful, when finding that special person. Nice rhymes in this. Loved it.

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