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Can't Have

Anymore all I think about is you
Sitting and just thinking
Of random things or other comments that you
Have said that just make me smile to myself.

I’m starting to miss you more
And more when I’m not talking to.
I don’t know what to do about that.

Now you have become the first thing I think
About when I wake up in the morning,
And the last thing I think about
Before I fall sleep at night.

I want you to be that person
That can hold me when I’m crying.

Or the guy that wraps there strong
Manly arms around me
To hold me close, making me
Feel like everything will be ok for once.

I rips at my heart that I can’t have you.
I’m tired of wanting something
That I can’t have.

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this one isn't completly finished yet...still a work in progress

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  • Lady Michaella
    July 13, 2008

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    Thanks for entering! This poem shows your emotion, which I'm choosing to believe is your current emotion as it is really true and heart felt. There were some grammatical errors, Try spell check..