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Vacant Eyes

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You stare through me with
vacant eyes, yet still I drown
in your sapphire love.

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  • Desire gold member
    June 10, 2008

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    Thank You!!

    Thank You for Your entry: Vacant Eyes
    This piece tugged hard at Spirit and while I was reading which I did several times~ after inhaling Your words, I kept seeing words: puppydog eyes~
    and hearing what sounds like a Philly Dog- but being shown a hot dog for some reason
    Then seeing a chihuahua~ hearing phrase: Quiero Taco Bell Read again and heard what sounded like phrase: Saturday in the Park~ (which is a song by Chicago coincidentally also) and nudged to mention: You've got game...kept hearing that phrase~
    Hopefully that makes sense
    Powerful images You have brought forth

    These words grabbed and pulled~
    ...your sapphire love
    Beautiful Voice spoken~

    Thank You for sharing Your Heart also Spirit!
    Best wishes to You in the contest Sweet Soul
    **Judging will be done shortly...
    Many blessings too
    and much love~ Desire~*~


  • Zenda-Lokki
    June 7, 2008

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    Perfect

    I just love the picture and the background, they suit so well sis x Your short poem should have won a trophy. Keep writing sis, you are a great poet x


  • Lukey
    June 7, 2008

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    Sometimes, much can be said in few words. This is one such instance. Volumes spoken in this verse.


  • grannyeri gold member
    June 6, 2008

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    Liked the background and color of the cloth you chose for this poem - fits so well with the picture color. Liked this interpretation of the prompt.