It hurts when you disapprove
when you know i love you
i try hard to make it
Im in love and broken
the boy i love dosent love me back
you used to be my hero
it feels like you dont care anymore
I wont ever be good enough for you!
cant you see my tears
please dont turn your back
i cant loose you today
i want to tell you how i feel
what if you dont understand
your image is conpeleted
you had me at HELLO
breaking me at GOODBYE......
Author notes
this is for Brian ily
A contest entry
- .:LOVE:. by chore2chore.
330 points, ended July 16, 2008, 19 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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keep your head up you will find someone better one day.
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This poem is bursting with emotion and the feelings come through really well, its an excellent write
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Great piece. I love it. Clearly full of emotions. This is an amazing write.(: Keep it up.
~Katie
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great piece!
"you had me at HELLO
breaking me at GOODBYE...... "
why love does this to us i'll never know.
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Wow this is really a wonderful poem
who will say you are only a 15 years old girl?
you have written a great matured poem, you really have potential in you..keep writing
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this is deffinitly what i needed today.
i went through alot of tears today with me lost love saying goodbye. amoungst other things...
this is just what i needed.
it makes me see that i am not alone in this matter.
it is so great.
thankyou.
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good! i really like "you had me at HELLO, breaking me at GOODBYE....." good job!
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