A life goal made easier to accomplish
A wish made easier to fulfill
Chances multiplied by two
A truth unwritten
Becomes a truth untold
Secrets hidden
As the truth unfolds
Afraid but unashamed
Amazed by all the things I missed
Nothing to hold me back
Never again am I gonna miss out on this
Come on baby don’t leave me waiting
Are you willing to cross that line?
Listen to me talking like a fool
But my heart’s beating again baby
I keep living because of you
You were there when the bottom fell out of the sky
You were the one to help me see it through
And at the time I didn’t realize
But now I see
Just how much I love you
You are my everything
You are my sun, and my moon
My shining star
When ever you feel alone
Just turn around and see
That you are never on your own
I’m here for you through everything
Call me what you want
Your best friend
Your sister
Your lover
As long as I’m yours
I couldn’t care
A contest entry
- Names by Midnight-x-Rose.
300 points, ended June 20, 2008, 25 entries
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Simple, but well wrote... very sweet and nurturing, not enough of that these days.
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My favorite lines were...... All of them of course. lol... 17 - 21 and 29- end
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personally I liked 17-24 the most...but hey your opinion not mine I'll but out...lol
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This is an awesome read. Picked me up like a tornado, and took me for a ride.
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Thanks....one of the best comments I've gotten on this poem...the other someone used a stanza to send to their bf and told me they thought my empathic abilities were working into my writing again...for once they weren't...lol
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