Even during the thick dark hours
you can glance a beaming light
with naked eyes,
guiding you all through the spell
Some times a desert
astonishes us
spreading green patches
entirely in new columns
It all is enlivened only
with your innovative thoughts and hopes.
Be sure! nothing can beat
the beauty of the living world!!!
Author notes
The Prompt:
Where there's breath...There's hope!
A contest entry
- Quickie Quote Prompt # 6 by BluesMan.
875 points, ended July 16, 2008, 32 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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Great imagery and metaphor Thank you for entering my contest
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Sahara says, "No," yet human beings found a way to make it a trading post! Great write of hope and acceptance.
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inpirational
Your poem has a unique form with a thought left at the end of each verse. I like the unusual way way you do that.
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