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many musical ears-------------

Is the baby in the belly
crying a lot without a reason
Don't worry!!
teach[sing] her songs
eulogizing the grace of lord!

once the baby eases out
it  will become an ardent devotee of HIM
with many musical ears hovering around

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  • whispernthedark Greeters member
    June 7, 2008

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    From the looks of the mother-to-be in the picture I don't think she'll be singing the Lord's praises, too bad for the baby. This is a lovely poem, thank you for entering the contest, good luck.

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    whisper