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queen of hearts

virgin in waiting

    highest resolve kept

          her conviction masqued



    his courage
        hidden
          within
              her
                  heart










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  • Desire gold member
    June 10, 2008

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    Thank You!!

    Thank You for Your entry: queen of hearts
    This piece tugged hard at Spirit and while I was reading which I did several times~ after inhaling Your words, I kept seeing snippets from the movie Eyes Wide Shut For some reason~ hearing word: Portugese as if wanting to say a phrase to You in
    Portugese~ Wild as it sounds...kept hearing words: Mother-n-law...after reading Your
    verse- as if reference to a dish~ then word: butter (American term)- some sausage basted in butter~ actually pork fat to be more precise I'm trying to write what I am seeing after
    reading- Now also getting word: Netherlands- then skips over to phrase: Why aren't You published? ( hearing that question) reference to series and hearing word: snippets
    like a Journey~ of travels...Oy! and being shown an Cuban cigar
    Hopefully that makes sense
    Powerful images You have brought forth

    These words grabbed and pulled~
    her conviction masqued
    Unique Voice spoken~

    Thank You for sharing Your Heart also Spirit!
    Best wishes to You in the contest Sweet Soul
    **Judging will be done shortly...
    Many blessings too
    and much love~ Desire~*~

  • Yvette Champ gold member
    June 8, 2008
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  • NurseChilly gold member
    June 7, 2008

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    very nice Richard, such subtle imagery and a lovely feel to it...

    sigh

    Gilly.x


  • grannyeri gold member
    June 6, 2008

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    So many different takes on this contest picture prompt - makes these contests so interesting - like your take on it.


  • Dalaney gold member
    June 6, 2008

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    aha! I love being the first to comment on a freshly written and posted poem It is so rare!

    I adore haiku, although I find it frustrating to write (I always get blasted by the traditionalists, and scorned by the non-traditionalists...go figure). You, however, have done it with flair, but then, sweet Poet, you always do

    Love, Lane

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