Gentle Flower

Flower,

gently lifted

from the garden

by the hand that planted her,

because this gardener knew that

even though her radiance would be missed

by those that walked day-after-day in the garden,

her spirit needed to be seen

for those who were blind

to the garden paradise.

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crazymomma
June 7
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This is amazing. I loved it. Nothing more to say but BEAUTIFUL!
darell
June 7

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Intriguing
a sweet tribute to beauty and rare
treasures one can only find in the heart.
I think you did a marvelous job of
conveying your personal feelings.
This kind of reminded me of someone
I once knew that was very dear to me.
She past away very young. Enchanting

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LoverBoy4u
June 7
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i really liked your poem
good work and good creativity
poetesscribe1
June 7

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Just Beautiful!
Wonderful flow here dear fellow poet!...lovely words which smoothly grace the screen and the reader...tk u for sharing...PS
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OurxBeginning
June 6

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I agree a wonderful rememberance. I found this to be very beautiful, though a little sad. A short piece, but very deep. Thank you for entering and good luck.
KayJay
June 6
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Very tender and loving... and a wonderful rememberance.
Ken