I close my eyes with you laying by my side
my heart smiles and my mind is open wide
have never felt so free
I can just fly away with you
fly away to a place
were we can spent the rest of our days
take my heart
keep in safe
please just tucked away
never let it go
I just can’t stand to lose love again
because one more heart break
and it’s the end
but you make me believe
that love is meant to be
you opened the blinds
that seemed forever to be closed
but now I can see the morning light
and you glowing brightly in my heart
you welcomed me
with your arms opened wide
mended all the words that caused such harm
I didn’t even have to kiss you
cause the first time we held hands
I knew that this love would last forever
Author notes
option #1
A contest entry
- Lyric Inspiration (Prewrites allowed) by Voodoo Eyes.
550 points, ended June 17, 2008, 9 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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I love it
The last paragraph was awesome. It is well written.
You did good.
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awesome
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This was very sweet. Thanks so much for entering my contest. I love the way you rewrote, in a sence, the song and what the lyricist was saying. Wonderful job!
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