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stopped the bleeding

You hurt me so much
I was always so overwhelmed with emotion and pain
Id cut and cut...each time was deeper and more aggressive
I bled myself dry for you
My razor got the most use out of it when we were together
Relationships are supposed to be a positive, loving thing
What did you think relationships were?
But Im so over it, I just regret all these ugly scars
Each and every one of them reminds me of YOU
You? FUCK YOU
Im serious...your the worst person I have EVER met in my entire life
Heartless, cold person...with no remorse for hurting me
You didnt care, actually you never did
How do I know this? You openly told me
You stole my heart even after I told you I couldnt stand heartbreak...and needed to be taken care of
I warned you not to lead me on
But you fucking did anyway
Well guess what? Im done bleeding for you
No longer will I waste tears and blood over nothing
Next time I cut...wont be over you
I promise you that...at least one of us can keep promises that they make
Goodbye and good riddance

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an x bf wont leave me alone so...i decided to tell him how i felt lol

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  • Redeemed15
    August 6, 2008
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    Where is the hope? Such a great poem if there was hope tied into it.


  • peridotPixi
    June 18, 2008

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    i really love the depth you have put into this wonderful poem, i think i would have to kill him too (like james) i like the feelings and the expresion you have used here and i love how next time, it wont be over him, congrats on your silver and as always keep up the wonderful writing ~your wifey Amy


  • Christina-is-crazy
    June 18, 2008
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    This is a really great poem,
    keep up the good work,
    Thank you for entering the contest.
    And good luck
    ♥ christina

  • Christina-is-crazy
    June 18, 2008

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    Thsi is a really great poem, keep up the good woek, and thank you so much for entering my contest, ♥ Christina


  • XNevermindX
    June 6, 2008

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    I am with your b/f on this; he must be found and nicely stuffed....whith something painful. Like the poem though, real anger and emotion.


  • ur-ma-warnd-bout-me
    June 6, 2008
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    •ill kill him

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