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Creepy crawler

What is which creeps, along the wall?
Silent, deadly, down he crawls.
Do not be fooled, he might be small,
He might seem helpless, as he stalls,
But with a moment’s deadly time,
Upon your head he’ll climb!

As fast as lightning, by your eyes,
He’ll steal from you a deadly prize!
For innocent and small he seems,
His bite, alas, will win your screams!

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this is about a spider. Random, I know ^^.

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  • Rheea gold member
    July 6, 2008
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    You are young and amazing. This is so simple yet not.