You always make me smile,
with those big brown eyes,
you make my time worthwhile,
leaving every pain behind.
Random, how we met,
I loved the other guy,
but to him, I was a bet,
to you, your guiding light.
This probably sounds cliché,
but is you who I want,
you might not be a "hot babe",
but I love you in every way.
Those jokes, those hugs,
were simply something else,
your kiss, your touch,
with them I never had to dwell.
You were always there,
set to be my guide,
with you I had to shared,
the most beautiful times...
Of my life,
I love you,
~♥~
Author notes
"this is something we only share"-XXVampireeyesXX
This is actually very personal but I decided to lay it down thanks to my great inspiration crazymomma...
this is for a guy I appreciate a lot..
In a list
A contest entry
- who you love by Merciful-Manner.
431 points, ended June 7, 2008, 31 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - .•¤**¤•. Love .•¤**¤•. by XBeautiful MistakeX.
550 points, ended August 4, 2008, 31 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Love by blaq roze.
650 points, ended August 7, 2008, 13 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Never Again Will This Hurt Me
Comments
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first of all: love the background and colors...secondly: wow!! this was fantastic...and since i have brown eyes, you had me from "hello"
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so sweet.. ^_^
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awe this is great!!! its so nice to have someone to love!! thank you for entering
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This is amazing i lovers it
very sweet and nice
very well written -
A beautiful and heartfelt write so full of love for this special man. I am so glad you have found love. Thanks for sharing and good luck in the contest.
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Beautiful
It is amazing how someone can impact us to the extent of more than being weak in the knees but being loved to the point where we find ourselves falling for them. any ways my whole point is this is a very beautiful poem and its incredible how love can change us for the better. any ways enjoyed reading this and keep up the good work =) =)
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Beautiful. Seems so heartfelt and honest. Great job my daughter
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