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Closed Gates

Missing image
Confined in between
  the conclusions left unsolved

Devoured by illusions
  that kept my world hidden
    behind crystal compositions

Humbling myself over tiny fragments
    of beastly memories that-
        carry your graceless name.-


Caged inside this screeching institution
      that dares blot my vital personality
          with hideously false stabilities of mind.

Jinxed realm I have lodged in;
  All of this, made for adulation,
    plain invitations of carnal desires.


Trapped at last, entwined feast,
  hollowed out empty resolutions,
    obviously winning your self-inflicted wage.

Appease your needs tonight, beast!
  I will not wander, I will not dispute your will,
    for as far as I've gotten, tonight-
        The gates are closed-
            ~♥~

Author notes

"Will never escape my overwhelming power."-XXVampireeyesXX

Just felt like doing something creepy.. *evil*
"Manson"

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  • KateMadness
    June 11, 2008

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    Hmmm

    Okay, that was something new.
    I don't see Manson in your author notes...tsk tsk, dear.
    Oh well.
    A great job to you.
    Thanks for the 'Sweet Dream'.


  • Darkend
    June 10, 2008

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    Mwahahahahahahaha...

    Felt your poem should have an evil laugh at the end...Sorry bit of a hollywood dramatic. Very Well done with lots of little twists and turns. Loved all of the imagery. Thank you for entering and best of luck in my contest!