S oft was his touch
E xcitment was his alone
X rated were his thoughts
U nable to run was the child
A ll alone in this nightmare
L ife, this was not
A ll too common
B attered and alone
U nsure of the world
S omeone listen please
E xtend your hand to this child
Author notes
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A contest entry
- Contest: Child Abuse Prevention - June by Page Shut down.
600 points, ended July 1, 2008, 14 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Extend your hand to this child ... that is exactly what the world needs to understand and do.
Excellent acrostic
♥
Thank you for your entry in Child Abuse Prevention Contest & Best of luck
Stay safe
~Manda
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A ll alone in this nightmare
L ife, this was not
A ll too common
B attered and alone
U nsure of the world
S omeone listen please
E xtend your hand to this child wow this is so powerful
and I can relate to your poem good luck in 5the contest

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i like this alot especially the beginning
"S oft was his touch
E xcitment was his alone
X rated were his thoughts
U nable to run was the child"
Great job -
a good piece of poetry, sad with the content, the world is full to ursting with mental people who get pleasure from other's pain.





