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sexual abuse (acrostic) (silver)

S oft was his touch
E xcitment was his alone
X rated were his thoughts
U nable to run was the child
A ll alone in this nightmare
L ife, this was not

A ll too common
B attered and alone
U nsure of the world
S omeone listen please
E xtend your hand to this child

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  • Manda Kathryn Greeters member
    June 13, 2008

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    Extend your hand to this child ... that is exactly what the world needs to understand and do.
    Excellent acrostic


    Thank you for your entry in Child Abuse Prevention Contest & Best of luck
    Stay safe
    ~Manda


  • maralisa silver member
    June 12, 2008

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    A ll alone in this nightmare
    L ife, this was not

    A ll too common
    B attered and alone
    U nsure of the world
    S omeone listen please
    E xtend your hand to this child wow this is so powerful
    and I can relate to your poem good luck in 5the contest


  • InMyFlames
    June 7, 2008

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    i like this alot especially the beginning
    "S oft was his touch
    E xcitment was his alone
    X rated were his thoughts
    U nable to run was the child"

    Great job


  • individuality gold member
    June 6, 2008

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    a good piece of poetry, sad with the content, the world is full to ursting with mental people who get pleasure from other's pain.