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Under the Stars








We are whispering under the stars
naked under the same blanket.
Our passionate winds have come and gone
and now our bodies lie resting
From our dance with pleasure

Why we whisper I do not know.
The stars cannot hear us .
Somehow we think they can.
I touch your tender face softly
with my fingertips.
You smile and move closer.

My elbow on the hard ground
my head in my palms
as I lay on my side.
I flirt with you tickling playfully.
Shyly you tickle back
sending giggles into the night air

Passion is reborn and we make love again
whispering not because we are ashamed
or even because the stars can hear us
But because there is a croon in our voices
a sigh the other wants to hear
in the passion of the moment.







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  • crazymomma
    June 7

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    Is it hot in here? or just this poem. God I wish my man were more like you. This is so beautiful. I love the last verse best. Why whisper when you don't need to. I know why lol


  • XXVampireeyesXX silver member
    June 6
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    aww how lovable! I enjoyed it so much! good luck!

  • Nature Song silver member
    June 6

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    A sigh the other wants to her...passsion..under the stars as they make love again! Sigh...this is so sensual. ~Sie


  • delightfulmess silver member
    June 6

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    Love the whispering part. Sometimes you feel so connected with the spiritual that you just must whisper. Sigh... Love that feeling.


    Delila


  • Cannonsfire silver member
    June 6

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    Caught up in the moment here, nice snapshot but I feel I am peeking under the blanket

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