Creation has not ended
in fact, it will never end…
A beginning of us?
we have always been…
a thought
horizons born
coalescence of divine energy
the blooming of matter.
A place for things
to be. Form
space and time.
Then
within the outward
end of a sigh
countless points of light
released. We
given spirit to fly.
The cosmos began to evolve…
Creation has not ended
It will never end.
So here we are!
A contest entry
- creation by james119.
600 points, ended June 20, 2008, 12 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Good commentary and point made in this piece. It does read a bit like prose to me, but still makes a good point.
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I find this a thoughtful conclusion. It is well expressed and ends with interest.
to me the most interesting lines:
A beginning of us?
we have always been…
within the outward
end of a sigh
coalescence of divine energy
the blooming of matter.
So here we are!
thank you for entering.
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