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Let there be...

Nothingness, a vortex, wholly blank,

devoid of light or shadow,

an endless emptiness

without a single shaft of energy.

 

Suddenly,

in the volatile transfusion of supreme being power,

divine voice utters in booming eloquence,

commanding in pure intended inspiration

within the vast absence,

appearance of the universe,

tempest, naturally teeming,

life sprawling in unbridled quintessence

from a single sound of will.

 

Time given ticks in the eternal clock

physical reality

forged as dimensional schism from immortal,

aging infused to sculpts

the harvest of evolving life,

born in the inspired miasma

is a mortal mind,

repository of intuitive recollections

from soul's implanted tether to heavenly womb,

having eyes to see ethereal signature

upon what was by shear force of numinous omnipotence,

given animation and splendor.

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  • Supa Fox
    June 14, 2008

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    Great take on the creation of things. I like how the title can be interpretted in so many different ways. The vocabulary and imagery are wonderful here. Keep writing ^.^


  • melphleg gold member
    June 10, 2008
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    Excellent vocabulary and descriptions here. Very nice summarization of "the beginning."


  • james119
    June 10, 2008
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    And God spoke...
    this is a lovely collection of words, nicely arranged with purpose.
    my favorite lines:

    Time given ticks in the eternal clock
    physical reality
    forged as dimensional schism from immortal,


    having eyes to see ethereal signature
    upon what was by shear force of numinous omnipotence,
    given animation and splendor.

    thanks for entering


  • Swan song gold member
    June 7, 2008
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    AS always pure awesomeness here!


  • delightfulmess silver member
    June 6, 2008

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    Splendid... You have penned a beauty as always.
    I love these lines.

    "life sprawling in unbridled quintessence
    from a single sound of will."

    Stunning. Best of luck in the contest.


    Delila



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