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Like Suicide

I had a dream last night
A dream that you said goodbye
So final
So real

It just doesn't seem right
I don't think I will ever know why
This trial
I feel

You walked away from me
Where are all our good times now
You fade
I cry

Your face is what I see
You left me alone and I don't know how
This cascade
I fry

In a cold sweat I awake
To look around and miss you so much
I need
You here

A smile on my face that I fake
My mind decays as I miss your touch
They feed
My dear

Over two years in hell
Are you up there in heaven
Without me
All alone

I can't wake from this spell
You left us all here and forsaken
I see
Your stone

You've both been gone
Left us all here to grieve
Our loss
You're gone

I sit here at dawn
Memories I retrieve
You toss
Stomp on

Author notes

This was written about two friends that I lost to suicide a little over two years ago. I had a dream about it last night and felt the need to get it out.

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  • spideracer gold member
    August 19

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    This poem to me feels like lyrics, the way you've written it is awesome. I recently had someone die that I knew due to suicide, and so I know how it feels to lose someone in that way. Great job you've done here.


  • Reoku
    June 7, 2008
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    I really like this one, Katrina.

    Good job