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This Puzzle of Me

Simple complexities adorned within eyes
that speak mere truths, free of disguise.
To my heart, you'll find an intricate maze
where the clues lay hidden in tender gaze.


And, oh but a smile, this puzzle of me;
searching for treasure in eternity's sea.
A map, I'll create, that keeps you near
for the answers you seek are waiting right here.


'Neath sacred flesh, no secrets to hide,
the sum of your quotient won't be denied,
that the mark of a question no longer remains;
you're the cure to this riddle in my life's game.


Just open your mind to let me in,
I am your mystery, will you win?
With one simple word and that look in your eyes~
this puzzle's been solved, and I the prize.

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Prompt: Oh ! You said that I am a puzzle, then ,please solve me...Unknown

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  • schellou
    June 10, 2008
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    Very Well written. I feel like a puzzle sometimes!


  • PrabhuDayal Khattar silver member
    June 8, 2008

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    I like the prize..this is a great write indeed..beautifully written and well concieved as well..thanks for sharing it...


  • Childsight
    June 7, 2008
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    great write! it flowed very nicely together. best of luck in the contest!


  • CookieZeal Greeters member
    June 6, 2008

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    I must admit. I love the title above everything else.
    But the rhyme and reason blend so nicely together into a potpourri of sophisticated reasoning that just happens to stand with poetic verse.

    So well written overall. Thank you dear one!
    CookieZeal/D


  • JeannieD Hunter gold member
    June 6, 2008

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    Oh this is delightful!! And indeed you are a prize. Wonderfully written take on the prompt. Good luck in the contest.


  • KayJay
    June 6, 2008
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    Nicely done... Great rhyme and flow to this... and a wonderful message...
    Ken


  • Equus
    June 6, 2008
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    Love it. Very rich and elegant.


  • Rovingone gold member
    June 6, 2008

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    Oh, how could anyone resist such a torrid piece of writing, straight from in heart. Such an invitation to some private paradise.

    • StormGoddess Greeters member
      June 6, 2008
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      Thank you Ed, appreciate your comments. Not so sure about thbe paradise thing though. Just plain ole me!

      Storm

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