Pushed up against
the the cobblestone wall
of social pressures
forced to be unaccepted
the loner trapped
in this desolate world.
With no where to run
and no where to hide
I'm pinned up against the slab of hate
pieced together by the many deadly sins
repeated over and over again
in a never ending pattern
A contest entry
- Names by xxRainbowDawnxx.
300 points, ended June 20, 2008, 25 entries
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Comments
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wow, you need to feel your way to a door, and get to the greener pastures on the other side, or start climbing, the wall is not a happening place, it's a blockade to happiness....best to you.~~Artis
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straight to the point real!!!
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wow. It was a great write. I thought that it was filled with sadness and it was kind of disturbing. It was a very amazing poem
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Trust me, I feel this way too...you made this very strong and although it's sad, I think many people can relate to this.
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This is powerful, but quite disturbing and sad.
Good write.
Samuel
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