A puzzle of pieces,
much to understand,
I may not know you
I still take your hand.
your entire being
inside and out,
it's hard to know
what you're all about.
A true enigma,
you caught my eye,
I feel closer to you
as time goes by.
You paint me a picture
as I get to know you,
the pieces fall together,
there remain but a few.
The entire picture
may never be known,
pieces are missing
but together we've grown.
A contest entry
- please solve me... by PrabhuDayal Khattar.
300 points, ended June 20, 2008, 19 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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So true and so wonderfully stated verse you have pourtrayed..I love the immagery and the flow itself..thanks for sharing it...
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Nice take on the prompt... smooth rhyme and flow... Very well done.
Ken
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