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Creation

In due course,
after conception,
with triumphant first breaths
newborns wail and cry
as their parents
marvel at the wonder
of creation.

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  • melphleg gold member
    June 10, 2008

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    Short but sweet. Very tender write in a few words. Nice, creative take on creation. Nothing like the miracle and wonder of birth.


  • james119
    June 10, 2008

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    nice vignette here.

    the amazing miracle of birth, so often minimized but presented here for what it is.

    thanks for entering