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One of my friends

When you think you know someone and you trust her like your best friend
But then she lies and makes rumors about you and you feel like in a died end
When some of your friend tells you not to be friends with her
But then you stop talking to that friend who told you not to talk to her
You feel that you are stuck in the world that you hate
And you do not know what to do with your life and every one of your family is looking you with hatred
And you think you cannot trust someone and you feel you went to grab your thing and run of
But when you’re packing and you started to think why I should do this it is not worth to run of
But no one is worth to run off out of your own home

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  • myrataal silver member
    June 7, 2008
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    Ah ... Write these thoughts, Love ...

    and be freed by all the shadows.


  • phynix
    June 6, 2008

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    good poem. i like the story/concept, but u may want to rephrase/change some parts to make it a little more smooth