She said; Your breath stinks and you’ve turn blue
How did it happen I’m sure you haven’t a clue
I bet you don’t remember a blasted thing
I knew you were pickled the moment
“Who Let the Dogs Out” you started to sing
Staying out with the boys without a care
What the hell did you do to your hair
I’ve had enough its over we’re through
He said; Stop shouting bitch (female dog)me too
I turned blue just thinking about coming home to you
A contest entry
- PIF PICTURE CONTEST by penman.
750 points, ended June 6, 2008, 9 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Wonderful
Very well done. best of luck in the contest.
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Belatedly I thank you for the honorable mention and the comment. I've been away from this site and this is my first chance to say thank you. God Bless
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