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Friday morning special; make it two rounds of toast and hot buttered hips

 

 

incessantly, my mouth runs away in the morning:
my mother says,
in my 46th year, never to talk with my mouthful
now, i know she means food,

 

mum isn't one for sharing her bedroom antics

nor mine with her;

i remember finding some lilac lace panties once, in her underwear drawer
& thought my dad was a randy sod, 15 was an awkward age.



Now-
coughs, mutters under a low-burn breath

'bout the size of your cock
how i love to talk to it, utter obscenities around it
whether my mouth is full

or yours

incessant, breakfast on the hoof.

 

 

 

 

 

 

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  • Cat
    July 1, 2008
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    How did i miss this one?.. this is excellent gill...

    m


  • AJ Morelli gold member
    June 29, 2008

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    oh, gill what can i say, you out did yourself for this... the title really sets a wonderful, playful tone and allows you to enter the always interesting minefield of the sex lives of our parents, which can be off putting if not handled with grace and humor as you have done... the almost aside of "15 was an awkward age." is so perfectly placed and disarming...

    stanza 3 is just perfectly dirty... i like how natural the conversational tone is here...


    breakfast on the hoof.... as an american i read breakfast on the run, damn you brits have the most descriptive image filled phrases, one of my favorite things about visiting England was all the great euphemisms i'd be making mental note of..


    another in a series of strong entries and one that must be considered...


    i really like this gillian


    al


  • J.J. Sass
    June 26, 2008

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    Okay, where's my comment? Musta got stuck in my head... yeesh I hate when that happens!

    This reminds me why I'm sometimes happy my parents weren't together... so I didn't experience those awkward parents sex moments lol!

    This is dirty indeed G, and it isn't very good etiquette to talk with our mouths full is it?

    Nicely done, and best wishes in the contest.
    Stacy


  • Thoughts-of-Soloman
    June 16, 2008

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    What strikes me is...

    This as usual is so unmistakably YOU!

    Sharp - Funny - Sexy

    Like only you could do ... all at the same time!!!

    Sol

    HAPPY BIRTHDAY GILLY!!! X X X x


  • misselaineous
    June 16, 2008

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    my daughter puts her fingers in her ears when the discussion ever gets to sex!
    i will ask her to read this onme i think
    super stuff miss gilly
    one should never speak with ones mouthful
    lol! not decorous
    elaine


  • Swan song gold member
    June 14, 2008

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    Well I will never look at breakfast of even think about talking with my mouth ful the same way again!

  • Yvette Champ gold member
    June 8, 2008
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  • grm
    June 7, 2008

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    <----that's the pic that came to mind. lolol

    nudge, nudge, wink, wink

    shazam!


  • Lucy.
    June 7, 2008

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    I keep missing you lately. I miss you!


    • NurseChilly gold member
      June 8, 2008
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      awww sorry girl... it's not often i get to go out, but when i do, it happens twice in one week... lololol


  • DogFish silver member
    June 6, 2008
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    It was awful when I discovered: it is just as hard being a parent as it is dealing with them...

  • Lucy.
    June 6, 2008
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  • tara wilson gold member
    June 6, 2008
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    lolol....I love fish's comment.

    this is soooo good



  • Nicolette gold member
    June 6, 2008

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    Your mom knew what she was talking about...luckily you caught onto the real meaning of "not talking when your mouth is full", gilly

    hmmmm this made me think of breakfast in bed and i'm NOT thinking of toast, lololol

    ooooh this is a good one...talk to that thing, girl, swirl the words around it!! You are SO good at this - delicious poetry.

    ~ Nicolette


  • layla.
    June 6, 2008
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    *hides behind whatever she gets*

  • silverfish
    June 6, 2008

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    . . . now i'm going to have to stay seated and cancel my a.m. meetings until things calm down. randy brits. -bonefish

    • NurseChilly gold member
      June 6, 2008
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      randy brits??? hahahhaha that's rich from you, you electriceelfish...

  • silverfish
    June 6, 2008
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    i haven't even read the poem and i'm all dorsally from hot buttered hips . . .


  • fortyninereasons gold member
    June 6, 2008

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    you are so good at Dirty! Sometimes it is best for children NOT to know! Juls


    • NurseChilly gold member
      June 6, 2008
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      i know... i remember my mum used to give us chores to do, and i had to put all the laundry away, including her knickers... and i found these rather delicious berlei panties... oohh errr... it aroused very strange thoughts and feelings at the time...

  • Rowan gold member
    June 6, 2008

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    lol. I hated being 15, and the idea that parents could be the least bit sexual was so disturbing.
    You are so good at dirty, girl.

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