It is really a puzzle to know about you
with hard core clues disturbing me all the time
Your omniscience is undetected and still invisible
and your omnipresence goes unsolved for years together
I believe in your trait of omni potent behaviour
and I can clearly visualize your acts and deeds
Away from the customs and traditions
and quite far away from the routine reminders
I can with a pious mind and pretty heart
beat on lines with much dedication and more devotion
Undoubtedly though given blanks initially puzzle all my nerves in tension
putting a lot of stress and strain on my soul
when I solve the puzzle taking the cue from clues
I am the happiest man on earth for ever,please remember
A contest entry
- please solve me... by PrabhuDayal Khattar.
300 points, ended June 20, 2008, 19 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Humm..I can see how you are trying to solve this puzzle..quite a hard job you did..but indeed a beautiful job you did..well done...
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Nice flow and imagery... but a bit obscure in meaning... You have me scratching my head a bit
. I know I like it but not sure why (LOL).
Ken
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