The night was warm
the wine was cold
he drew a heart
in the condensation...
I kissed his wet finger
licking the moisture,
he said,
"I love you"
and smiled.
Author notes
Prompt is the word 'Condensation'
In a list
A contest entry
- It's Called 'Condensation' by eltortedequeso.
875 points, ended June 11, 2008, 9 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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EXCELLENT Oh wow, I can truly see why this won a gold. PERFECT for the CONVINCE me contest. I will NEVER look at condensation quite the same way again.
Beautiful
~Pamela 
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o my, I can see why you won, this is so simple and BEAUTIFUL! I just see a clear picture in my mind. I love it!
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Absolutely beautiful!! Congrats on the gold, you deserved it!!!
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wow great write and congrats on gold my friend
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This is ver sweet! I have read it a few times and it still is such a nice, romantic read for me. Thank you for entering this!
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This is quite delicious, so tender and heartfelt and so believable.
On top of that it is yet another example of you "getting" Free Verse.
A mature and well written poem.
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