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My Morning Window

There they are again
Little fingerprint leftovers
Names on my window
Written by my little brother
To make streaks that will remain
Until I windex them away
I think I’ll leave them there.
They make me smile

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  • DolphinLass silver member
    June 11, 2008
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    very nicely written ...congrats


  • eltortedequeso
    June 11, 2008

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    haha, this is cute! at first it feels like the writer is tired of seeing these streaks anf prints. I would for sure, especially in my car...i hate that.....haha, sorry, back to this. the ending is very nice and cute. thank you for entering this!


  • Sherry gold member
    June 7, 2008

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    Awwwwh

    Awwwwwwwwwwwh beautiful Sharon a priceless memory goes to the heartstrings as I read touching and heartfelt.