As the clouds linger in the cool night sky
creating eerie shadows
she bears her soul to her closest friend
Tears stain her now molded pillow
She had struggled a long time
to find an answer to her question
but it still eluded her
How could he forfeit their plans?
Author notes
50 word limit wordbank used
pillow, molded, clouds, stain, soul, find,
question, shadows, forfeit, linger
....Anonymous contest so no names in comments please and best of luck everyone
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A contest entry
- Word Bank, Word Limit by piccola.
600 points, ended June 7, 2008, 14 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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deep and meaningful.. and using a wrod bank! wow... congrats on the gold
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Thank you for listing the words that you used, that's very helpful. You used all of them and 40 more making it exactly 50! The poem managed to make good sense which I know must have been hard. Thank you for the entry, and nice job.
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