Whenever I see a red rose or dream of one,
your always on my heart my precious son.
Those soft tender petals of brilliant red,
when you were so young, you sprinkled on my bed.
Red Heart Rose Petals this precious gift we share,
I miss you so much Matt, it's just not fair.
Why you had to leave so young, nobody really knows,
one thing is for sure you are my forever red rose.
A contest entry
- CONTEST FOR MY FAVOURITES ONLY.... by CinfullyDelicious.
950 points, ended June 6, 8 entries
Honorable winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
My son always gave me red rose's and it started when he sprinkled red rose petals all over my bed. I wrote a poem called Red Heart Rose Petals, this is where my heart was at when I saw this.
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very touching write
One can feel the pain in your words but also the strength to endure and I have to believe you will endure and am sure Matt would want you too as well.
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excellent
A beautiful and touching creation. So very well done. Congratulations on your honorable mention.
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Beautiful poem!
This is so touching and well written, too. A lovely way to honor your memories!
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So very touching, and what a wonderful tribute. In spite of your pain and suffering, your messages always tell a tale from deep within your heart, no matter how many pieces it has been broken into.
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Nice job!
Beautiful...just beautiful. Touches my heart just reading it. Congratulations on this work!!
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Nostalgia.......
how bittersweet it is my friend, but I hope the sweet will overwhelm the bitter for you because the memory is absolutely precious. To see that little boy sprinkling rose petals all over your bed in my mind is priceless!!! You wrote this piece with love and beauty as you do in all your poems!!! Thanks again for sharing another loving pasrt of your heart with me today!!!~~Toni~~
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Awe...
My darling friend again beauty laced with such a deep sorrow. Beautifully don as always. I hope life finds you well. Thank you for sharing.
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sweet. A beautiful tribute to your son and the gift he was to you. This reads both sad and joyful. Sad at the loss but joyful for the gift he was and is.
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This is absolutely beautiful sis!! Really touched my heart... what a precious memory to have and to see a red rose and be reminded of him.
Brought tears to my eyes... your work is always full of such emotion and honesty!
Lots of
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Just simply beautiful! Such heart and love that flows throughout.
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A beautiful heartfelt write
Such a loving gesture your beloved Matthew showed towards you his beloved mum, he held you with much love and esteem and he showed it from an early age, showing his kind and loving nature and heart.
This is a very tender and moving write dedicated to your forever red rose Matthew. Beautifuly written, thank you for sharing this special momment with me, you touch my heart.
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aw so touching Aunty Kelle...I know Matt loves this piece and is proud you shared it with me, what a special precious thing that is, he did
I hope this gave you the chance to smile on the memory and red roses
Much love & respect, this truly came from your heart and is the reason why your a favourite of mine..I always appreciate just what you have really shared with us all
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Cin
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Beautiful! I'm sure your son will love it, I know I did. Great write!
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