Yawning widely
as i always got dressed
I put on my bullet proof
karmic vest,
I've nocked on wood,
and good luck replied
"I'm not buying anything!
Stay OUT!" it cried.
I've talked to my plants
to help them grow quickly
But i think that they're deaf
cause they look kinda sickly
april showers bring may flowers
sending your mother some cheer?
FTD ships O`ver `night
any day of the year.
Advise from me?
You've got the wrong guy!
I hang wishes on stars
that trip from the sky!
I'll wish you well
but never say "God bless you"
He gets really mad if
you tell him what to do.
I'll take off my vest
Thanking not gloating,
those lucky stars
that are still floating.
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Comments
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lol jase you're a legend; the applause should say it all!!!
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I liked this peace!It was really good!Thanks for your entry!I enjoyed reading this one!~
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Lol this piece was terrific. It had humour, yet didn't overdo it. Perfect, great write!
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