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Obvious.

You are who I will always miss
eternally meant to bear this burden
of catching glimpses and flashes
of the boy who holds my best

you are everything I meant to be
captivating like an electric storm
catching his heart on fire.
stealing all of his good intentions

I am never enough.
A plain jane, the invisible girl
dying for your touch.
missing every shot.

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  • as.phy.xi.ate. gold member
    July 28, 2008

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    Hits home and hits hard lol Awesome write! Thank you so much for the entry!!! Good luck!

    ~KAtie


  • Never.Give.Up silver member
    July 18, 2008

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    I've felt like that so often.

    A wonderful write and I wish you Wonderful ideas for the future.

    Rose