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[ you are my tower ]

you are my tower
of babel
i would like to climb
on top of you
and feel heaven around me.

you have the strength to make me feel
weak

i want to stretch across you
like a bow
all sinew and strength
tightly drawn in anticipation

you have the strength to make me feel whole

when you touch me i shiver
from the heat
it radiates
and permeates into the air
blurs the world around me.

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  • delightfulmess silver member
    September 19, 2008

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    Awe... who wouldnt want to here this sweet piece of romance..
    Excellent, elegant and oh so sweet

    Thank you for entering my contest.



    Delila


  • CaliOkie silver member
    August 25, 2008

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    This is a powerful and sensual write.

    i want to stretch across you
    like a bow
    all sinew and strength
    tightly drawn in anticipation

    This is great. This could be a poem all by itself! Well done.

    Garrison


  • Soulful Woman silver member
    June 6, 2008

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    It is awesome to feel this power radiating from another person. I have had this experience and the bond that the people involved create is breathtaking. Thank you for sharing.
    Soulful Woman