Timeless
Everything seems shiny on the shore line of the Atlantic
Bathing in the light of dusty memories
The candle wanes with sepia melodies
Across star shining seas phantom fingers touch
While the night birds take wing upon that gossamer caress
nothing is heard for miles but the ebb and flow of the tide
Reddish wine sipped as Sighs beneath an incarnadine moon
Slowly bodies entangle a mixture of lustful senses
Breathless as only lovers know
Skin to skin they cross the borders into ecstasy
Lip upon trembling lip tongues twine the twilight
Sands sticking to bodies that only love can drench
The smell of salty sex in the air
thundering breaths they hope to never catch
surreality fuels the pulse of desire
quicksilver peaking among the stars and falling towards heaven.
The rising dawn and mists of morning dew
Cradle a scintillated romance that only the gods can see
envious voyeurs upon this fleshly bliss
as hearts aflame consume the timeless loops of time
~Fin~
♫♪ Gønzø Lø(v)e ♪♫
Shadows of Wolves
2008
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Brilliant!!!
The sea is always good for the soul, as well as for lovers in love, and you've painted quite an exciting metaphoric surrealism here. I think you've done a great job with this piece, and thank you for sharing. All the best to you!!! Peace, Cyn 
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I'm sorry and have to be honest but I don't like this one very much it seems like you put way to much thought into it and it shows it doesnt flow together I think the words are beautiful but not very well put together
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Very nice and melodic. It is vivid but subtle. I got the feel of watching a scene silhouetted against the backdrop of a coastal sky at night. I enjoyed the read.
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this was so wonderful..
I really loved the imagery
As well as the flow.. Very sensual as well
as romantic... Sent lovely "tangles" down the spine..
Well done!!! thank you very much for sharing!!...
Angel
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Descriptions make the spine tingle in this, so very well done. Love, C
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Thank you Fin for a sensual delight under an incarnadine moon. Love that particular image. Original and sweetly refreshing.
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A very descriptive piece of erotica, that is still sweet and tender and filled with love. you did a great job on this one.
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Erotic...
Enjoyable to read!!!
This took me on a journey, Lo-Amo, Salute!!! -
Wow!
Passion and love so beautifully described...
Love and passion should feel like this and it's a blessing when you find that
A fine sharing this is, my friend
All the best
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