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Careen

Blocked
Giving this a shot
Not sure I was ever good.
Not even sure why

Love.
Over it.
Over expressed.
The past.
visit it too much
I'm done

You.
Amazing
beautiful
steal me away
Don't lie.

Worry
Life.
Too much
not ready
Need you

helpful
loving
strong
wrap me up

fake
need emotion
need emotion
need a theme
a topic..

too happy.
for too long
how to write?

let it flow.
no good.
never enough
I'm never enough

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Comments

  • patrick20traveler
    November 5, 2008
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    I like it!

    Nice punch. You kept me reading to the end.


  • Josiah
    June 6, 2008
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    i like it and that line "never enough,I'm never enough" its sic and really catchy