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Judgement Day

I'm lying, cheating and stealing.
Complaining, disobeying and cursing.

These are my sins.
I am slapping him in the face.

Yet as I do this he still loves me.
I see his tears and pray for forgiveness.

He forgives.
I go without the sins for a while.

Then I'm back to slapping  him.
I go to church, I am fogiven again.

This time I stay.
I'm done. I hope.

I'm walking down the right road.
And I can see him running towards me.

Arms wide open, love in his eyes.
I get to him and I am home.

I'm so glad that,
God so loves me.


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  • Page Deleted.
    June 14, 2008
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    I was going through the shameless sections, and I found this. I'm an atheist, and I don't think I can leave a proper comment in regards to the content without being offensive, but it is good that you have such a strong belief, and that you aren't ashamed to admit it.

    Keep penning.







    Keira
    -- Liloven


  • Maili Knephthan gold member
    June 12, 2008
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    While I see God as someone that has hurt me constantly I like now you hold true to your religion. I am sorry I feel this way but he has done nothing but slap me in the face and hurt me constantly. Good luck with this and may you hold strong Good luck..Thank you for sharing


  • trombonekid
    June 8, 2008

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    love it

    i love that it shows that you truly love your religion. i like that i can understand what you feel in this. very awesome. keep it up.