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Swirl

you get me high
speak to me.
Make me feel you.
deep inside
I feel you.

forever.
long ago.
A dream.
once reality
your reality
my reality
breathe you in
let you in
live in you
live in me
strip me
of my sins
of my skin
of my life.
Love me
kill me
wrap yourself in me
let me rock you to oblivion
sweet oblivion
let's get high

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  • Manoj Sanyal
    March 21
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    Thanks for your participation.
    Good luck,


  • sinkfloridasink
    March 20

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    my favorite part was "Let's get high" haha. This was good though, I enjoyed it. good luck on the contest


  • Josiah
    June 6, 2008
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    i like this poem,great flo