wet.
sexual
chills.
like being
uncaring on drugs
~lost, heightened.
skin bumps surface.
shutter.
exstinguish logic.
it is the writhing.
it is the kneeling.
the taste,
even sweetness
cannot
know.
nor
fate.
Author notes
oh well, I tried.
A contest entry
- Sooooo Sensual.... by SummerlandRayne.
450 points, ended June 16, 2008, 19 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Your poetry is "like being uncaring on drugs." Thankfully, it is not bad for us! It is one habit I do not wish to kick because I love being able to actually be in the words. You make it so easy to do that.
"Skin bumps surface / shutter / extinguish logic."
I think you achieved just what you set out to write: pure passion.
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I think it's great! It is very sensual but with your own unique signature. Good luck in the contest!
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And a very nice try it was...
it is the writhing.
it is the kneeling.
the taste
Oh yes it is!!!
Thank you and best of luck in the contest!!!
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