bad trip
feel like shit
gotta quit
love that hit
cant quit
that sticky stick
in the clouds off the ground
feet up high not feeling down
quiters never win
loving sin
kills my pain
feeling sane
not dead yet
no regret
I'm so high in the sky
dont pull me down i wanna fly
hold it
dont blow it
dont think
dont even blink
take pleasure
of this treasure
illegal is just a word to me
cause love like this isn't free
light the sky with me
set this love open free..
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Comments
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Wow loved this great flow great emotion I can totaly relate to this in many ways great job
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cool, this one i want to know what inspired u on this!...? well done.
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Interesting piece, a lot of emotion. The rhyming was done very well, not forced at all. The ending also wraps it up, well. Thanks for entering and good luck.
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the rhyming works so well
and it makes so much sense
haah
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Wow...I liked this poem a lot.Great job!!
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haha soo true...ahh weed!
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wow. Love the flow. like seriously it was easy to read that.
you rock.
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