Does it really matter?
I've twisted words for you
Went against all odds for you
So does it really matter that I'm suffering for you?
Please understand
I've cut myself open for you
Over and over
And over again
I'm starting to get light headed
Author notes
It's only as bad as it looks.
A contest entry
- - by houseandcloud.
400 points, ended June 14, 2008, 7 entries
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Here I am, and I stand so tall. Just the way I'm supposed to be
Comments
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I love the last line. I love the way it finishes the poem, everything about it is great. The rest of the poem, however, I feel is a bit cliche. Thanks for entering.
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Awww,
I like it. 
My favorite part is:
"I've twisted words for you
Went against all odds for you"
Amazing write once again.
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