I gaze deep into your dark brown orbs
and take in your gentle aroma
yet so powerful that I can taste you.
Your plump lips red beg for the caress
of my two vagrants starving to touch.
In my arms I can feel your heart beat.
Your hair shines
sunlight gilding endlessly
off its silky surface
Your hot breath flows to me.
It tells me to come closer,
begs me to join with you.
At the touch sensation explodes.
I can feel it deep in my inner core.
Your eyes close and body melts into mine.
I want you more than the air I breathe.
We do not notice the tide
Overcoming our intense passion.
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Comments
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Last line of second last stanza needs to be 'you'
This is breathless stuff that begs a response.
I will wash the inhibitions away,
a finger lightly tracing soul
upon your chest, to seize your heart
the last thing I will leave you with...a kiss
the first thing you give me will be 'yes'...
Love, C
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Nicely done. Thank you for such an intense entry.
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