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Alone on the moon

I hate my life,
I want to die,
Why Can't I just break and cry,
Let it out,
and Let you in,
When will this heart of mine mend

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  • whispernthedark Greeters member
    June 10, 2008
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    Good take on the picture, thank you for entering the contest. Good luck.

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    whisper


  • lowercase prelude gold member
    June 9, 2008
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    wow. i hope you've resolved these issues. very deep, painful feelings, conveyed well

  • hipstorian
    June 6, 2008
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    nice job

    very personal feelings. straight to the point.