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For Just One Night

Your tender caress
softly raises my hairs
adorning my arm
as your raw palm
seeks out love
among my curvaceous twists and turns
weaving throughout my body.

One fragile touch
leaves the soul aching
for just one night with you
to let you into my deepest secrets
buried below soft cotton threads.

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  • jjbreunig3
    July 8, 2008

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    An enjoyable piece...

    An enjoyable piece; it's refreshing to read a sensual poem without outright vulgarity; nicely done. --Joe


  • Velvet Rose Petals
    June 8, 2008

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    Soft and Fragile. A true love story complete. Very uplifting and upbeat. Very well written. Good adjectives. I hope you win.
    Rose


  • Galaxy2
    June 6, 2008
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    Sorry....
    I forgot to applaud...
    here you are...


  • Galaxy2
    June 6, 2008

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    'For just one night with you
    to let you into my deepest secrets
    buried below soft cotton threads'

    The idea turns me on...
    how lustful!
    I really liked the erotica, honey!

    Kisses....all over!

    Galaxy


  • SummerlandRayne gold member
    June 6, 2008

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    What a wonderfully intense write...for just one night...but would that ever be enough of this kind of passion? I bet not! Lovely...thanks for the entry!!!


  • SpiritDarkmaiden
    June 6, 2008
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    O.o Wow lol nicely written

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