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Thank God For Rib Cages

I'd survive a million winter nights
just for the way the summer comes to life
when I need nothing more than sunlight
spring comes, snow melts
hearts are lighter than they've ever felt
and they'd up and float away
if they weren't held in by a cage
the ivory bones reserve control
we feel elated
our hearts are home

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  • dannyjay
    June 6, 2008
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    this was very nice and well put. thanks